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Trips of(f) the tongue

by loiswakeman @ 02 Feb. 2007 - 15:57:35

Most of my posts have been about the written word - but just as people seem not to read what they write, neither do they listen to what they are saying much of the time.

For example, on the BBC Radio 4 Today programme this morning, the newsreader (Susan Ray) said - of the incident in which a British man fell to his death from a Mexican hotel window - "Police are questioning a woman about the incident, probably his girlfriend". Written down, it looks dumb: how can an incident be anyone's girlfriend?

You don't need to know the exact rules of English grammar to realise that something coming after a comma usually refers to the most recently-mentioned subject. So, either "Police are questioning a woman, probably his girlfriend, about the incident" or "Police are questioning a woman about the incident. She is probably his girlfriend" would make more sense.

Engage brain first, open mouth second. Now there's an idea.

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deleted user [Visitor]

02/02/07 @ 16:08

Goodness me, you don't expect sense from a journalist do you? That would be too much to ask.

GB

litstudentlitstudent [Member]
02/02/07 @ 19:08

The worst one I heard on a news broadcast was last Remembrance Day when the newsreader claimed that the veterans had 'processed' up The Mall. 'Processed'?? They may have proceeded or the procession may have travelled up The Mall, but 'processed'?? What the heck is happeneing to our lovely language???

Ooooow you old perfectionist you. ;)

Actually I think it's quite sad. Time was when you could rely on the Today Programme for perfection. I still enjoy it (and PM too), but there's no doubt in my mind they're not as good as they once were.

SpideySiSpideySi [Member]
12/02/07 @ 00:11

Let's not be too hard on the newsreader. She was probably reading an autocue the creater of which is ultimately more deserving of our wrath. Mind you, most of us scan ahead when we are reading and she could have done the decent thing and corrected it. As for "processed up the Mall"? That really is quite shocking!

Speaking of newsreaders, who is the one campaigning for the correct use of English? He had an article in one of the broadsheets sometime back with some hilarious examples of misuse.

SpideySiSpideySi [Member]
15/02/07 @ 02:06

John Humhries!!!

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